Sun and Moon Crash (NaPoWriMo 2017, Day 8)

This post will serve prompts for both NaPoWriMo–Day 8, and TJ’s Household Haiku*.

http://www.napowrimo.net/day-eight-4/

“…our (optional) prompt. Today I’d like to challenge you to write a poem that relies on repetition. It can be repetition of a phrase, or just a word. Need a couple of examples? Try “The Bells” by Edgar Allen Poe, or Joy Harjo’s “She Had Some Horses”.”

* https://amaviedecoeurentier.wordpress.com/2017/04/07/tjs-household-haiku-sun-and-moon/

If sun and moon crash

Blinding night with falling shards

We’ll dance on splinters

~

We’ll dance on splinters

Fallen shards, love reflected

Music of sun, moon

~

Night hold this sun, moon

Wind plays eerie tinkling chimes

Shadow frames Love’s face

~

Crashing notes ~ sun, moon

We dance amid fallen shards

Music splinters hearts

~

Heart’s music splinters

Sun and moon crashed with your death

Dancing blind ‘mid shards

~

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10 thoughts on “Sun and Moon Crash (NaPoWriMo 2017, Day 8)

  1. Goodness gracious ! I am taken away by the sun and moon crashing , the dancing, the shards and the music, the love and the splinters! Marvelous times a zillion!

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  2. I enjoy how you work your haikus like this RL. I always have to read them over a few times to make sure I didn’t miss anything. They always blend so seamlessly into one poem.

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  3. Pingback: TJ’s Household Haiku Challenge | La vie est trop courte pour boire du mauvais vin

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